I went to the dentist because there was a hole in my back tooth.
It was pretty terrible. I didn’t notice, but there were a total of 10 caries.
I brush my teeth every day, why are they so bad!?
The worst cavity had reached the nerve.
However, The dentist managed to keep my tooth nerve!
There was no feeling in a part of my mouth, because the dentist gave me a lot of anesthesia during treatment.
After that, I was hungry and ate fried rice.
Then I bit my cheek with unthinkable momentum because of no sense.
But it didn’t hurt at all because the anesthesia was still working!
I’d been nervous about how painful it would be when the anesthesia was gone, but it wasn’t surprising.
On that day, I could eat yakiniku normally.
奥歯に穴が空いていたので、歯医者行ってきた。
結構ひどかった。気が付いていなかっただけで、全部で１０本ぐらい虫歯あった。
歯磨きは毎日しているのに、何故ここまでひどい事に！？
一番ひどいのは神経取るか取らないかのギリギリのラインだったが、何とか取らずに済んだぜ！
治療時に麻酔ガンガン使ったせいで、治療後はしばらく口の一部の感覚が全然無かった。
んで、お腹すいたんでチャーハン食べてたら、口の感覚が無いせいで、通常ありえんぐらいの勢いで口内を噛み切った。
でも麻酔が効いてるから全然痛く無い！
麻酔が切れた時にどれぐらいの痛みがあるのか、ドキドキだったが、案外大した事なかった！
安心して焼肉食えたぞ！
校閲の内容
there was a hole in my back teeth
→ もしこの「奥歯」が特定の１本のことであれば、tooth
caries
→ dental caries もしくは cavities が一般的（文脈上 caries も通じるが）
why is it so bad!?
→ why are they ～（複数）
The worst caries is the last line of whether to take nerves or not.
→ The worst cavity had reached the nerve（最悪の歯は神経に達していた、になるのでかなり変わってしまいましたが、英語的ではあります笑）
The doctor
→ the dentist（小文字＋歯医者はドクターとは呼ばない）
managed to keep my tooth nerves!
→ nerve（単数）
of a part of my mouth
→ in a part of ～
the doctor used a lot of anesthesia
→ the dentist gave me a lot of anesthesia
at the time of treatment
→ すっきりさせるには、during treatment
Then I bit my mouth
→ 噛んだのが頬の内側であれば、my cheek というらしいです
But it doesn’t hurt at all because anesthesia works!
→ ① didn’t
② the anesthesia was still working!（英語では過去形がベター）
I was nervous about
→ I’d/I had been nervous about（時制）
how much pain I had
→ how painful it would be（無難）
when anesthesia was gone
→ when the anesthesia ～（冠詞）
先生からのコメント
I think Japanese dentists are the best in the world. Even if you started to work abroad, you’d better come back for a dental checkup and a haircut (;))
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