Practice Presentation

me

Thank you for lisning to my presentation practice in today’s lesson!
I think I can make it better thanks to your various advice.

The production is still ahead, when the event is over, let’s talk about it!

tutor

I’m glad you found it helpful.
It was interesting to learn a little about accounting for my part.
I think utilising these occasions to practice English is really effective to improve on your skills.

me

Thanks! I will keep entering these event.
In that case, let’s practice again.

プレゼンの練習

今日のレッスンでは、プレゼンの練習に付き合ってくれてありがとう！
色々なアドバイスをもらったおかげで、より良いものが出来上がりそうだよ。
本番はまだ先だけど、イベントが終わったら、その話をしよう！

ありがとう！こういったイベントには、今後も積極的に参加していくよ！
その時は、また練習に付き合ってよ！

修正内容

Thank you for lisning my presentation practice in today’s lesson!
–> listening to, 〜を聞くの時はtoがいります

I can make it better because of your various advice.
–> I think I can make it better thanks to your various advice.
できあがりそう、なので最初にI thinkをつけた方が良い。
thanks to-で〜のおかげで

The production is still ahead, when the event is over, let’s talk about it
–>The production is still ahead, but when the event is over, let’s talk about it. だけどなのでbut出つなげる方が良い

At that timeはその時、〜だった。というようなニュアンス出使われる事が多い。その場合は、という意味に今文は近いので、in that case,の方が良いかも