Required abilities for humanity

Today, it was the first snow in Fukuoka.
I can’t move because it’s too cold.

I think humanity should be equipped with hibernation function.

福岡、初雪です。

寒すぎてどうにかなりそうなので、人類は冬眠機能を搭載するべきだと思います。

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Today, It was the first snow in Fukuoka.

→ it（小文字）

I think humanity should equippe with hibernation function.

→ should be equipped