A greeting we can use easily

I tried writing Hi to my English teacher as her yesterday’s advice when I ask her to correct my English diary.
I thought Hi was a greeting to be used between only close relationship.

But she taught me the following:

I’m not a very superior person, so you can say “Hi!” to me.
Of course, you have to be careful in a business situation or formal place.
I use “Hi!” to my customers, bosses and clerks, and use casually “hey! What’s up?” to close friends.

Oh! I didn’t know that at all!
I’ll use it from now on.

先日のアドバイスを受けて、英文の添削をお願いする時に「Hi!」から書き出してみた。
“Hi” は、親しい間柄に使う、ちょっと馴れ馴れしい挨拶かと思ってたけど、

「わたしはものすごく目上の人でもないのでHiで十分です。
もちろん固いビジネスの場やかしこまった場では気を付けないといけませんが。
わたしの顧客にもボスにも店員さんにもHiです。友人にはもっと砕けてhey! What’s up?ですね。」

というアドバイスをもらった。

全然知らなかった！
気軽に “Hi” を使っていくか。

修正前

A greeting we can easily use.

I try writing “Hi!” to my English teacher when I ask her to correct my English diary according to her yesterday’s advice.
I thought “Hi” is a greeting to be used in only close relationship.

But she taught me the following:

I’m not a very superior person, so you can say “Hi!” to me.
Of course, you have to be careful in a business situation or formal place.
I use “Hi!” for my customers, bosses and clerks, and use casually “hey! What’s up?” for close friends.

Oh! I didn’t know at all!
I’ll use it from now on.

修正内容

A greeting we can easily use.
→we can use easily.

I try writing “Hi!” to my English teacher when I ask her to correct my English diary according to her yesterday’s advice.
→tried writing Hi to my English teacher as her yesterday’s advice when 〜
もしくは、Following my teachers’s advice I tried 〜
according 以下は入りません。
Tried writing の他にwrote /used でも可

I thought “Hi” is a greeting to be used in only close relationship.
→Hi was
in→between
人と人との間で交わされてるものなので。

But she taught me the following:

I’m not a very superior person, so you can say “Hi!” to me.
Of course, you have to be careful in a business situation or formal place.

I use “Hi!” for my customers, bosses and clerks, and use casually “hey! What’s up?” for close friends.
→for じゃなくてto
Customersじゃなくてclients
顧客になり得ないお客さんはcustomers 例えば、スーパーに来る客とか
わたしは美容師でお客さんは全て顧客になりうる人なのでclients
Oh! I didn’t know at all!
→didn’t know that at all!!
I’ll use it from now on.