Message to a friend part 2

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OK!
You don’t have to worry about it at all.
It sounds like you have a lot of things going on.
I hope things will improve for you soon.
I respect your schedule.
I am very much looking forward to talking to you again.
When you feel ok, let’s talk again!

tutor

I don’t think there is anything rude about your reply.
It is ok to send it as it is, but I made some correction to make it sound more natural.
It might be nice to add some sentences like “I hope things will improve for you soon.” before “I respect your schedule.” to be even nicer.


友人へのメッセージ

おっけー!
全く気にする事ないよ。
ものすごく大変みたいだけど、体調には気をつけてね。
そっちのスケジュールを尊重する。
また話せる日を楽しみにしているよ。
落ち着いたら、また話をしよう!

修正内容

It sounds like a lot of work, but take care of yourself.
–>It sounds like you have a kot of things going on. の方が自然。

When you feel calm, let’s talk!
–>When you feel ok, let’s talk again!

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