Me
Hi! Katie.
I visited your blog!
It is very beautifully designed.
And your writing is very easy to understand.
I’m looking forward to the update of your blog from now on.
Katie
Thank you for your comment!
It took me so long to finish up one article.
I thought it was quite similar to writing an essay for an assignment.
Hopefully I could improve further and more people will read it.
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ブログ見たよ！
めっちゃ綺麗にデザインされてて、文章もすごく分かりやすい！
これからもブログの更新、楽しみにしているね！
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And Your expression is very easy to understand.
–> expressionだと表現なのでwritingの方が適切
I’m looking forward to update your blog from now on
–> I’m looking forward to the update of your blog from now on,
looking forward to udateだとアップデートするのが楽しみ、という意味になってしまう
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