My wife had a stuffy nose.
So she tried using the equipment to suction her stuffy nose.
But it had no effect.
Maybe it is only for children.
嫁も鼻づまりがひどくなったので、以前購入した、鼻水を吸う機械を使ってみたらしい。
が、効果はなかったそうな。
あれは子供向けと言う事で。
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So she had used an equipment suctions her stuffy nose.
→ 前文より後の事象なので、過去完了にはせず。試しに使ってみた ＝ tried using オススメ
→ おそらく関係代名詞省略型だろうと思うのですが、時制や意味の点でやや強引かな～😂
the equipment to suction her stuffy nose. か、
the suctioning equipment for her stuffy nose. など
But Is was no effect.
→ But it had no effect.
Maybe it is for children.
→ 文法的にはok、ニュアンス的には only for children.
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