An English document I will make part9

English01 LT

This diary is a continuation from the previous day.

Overview up to the other day

I applied for the event that engineers gather and talk to the audience about a theme of their own choice without deep thought.
The theme I applied is ‘What I got from writing an English diary for 5 months’
I have to think about the contents.
 


先日の続き。

先日までの概要

特に深い考えもなしに、エンジニアが集まってLTするイベントに、『英語で日記を5ヵ月書き続けて得られたもの。』というタイトルでエントリしたので、どんなスライド作るよ?
と考えている。


I almost finished making the presentation document, so I practiced with my teacher.

I have fixed some details of the document.
And, because some sentences were hard to talk, I’ve changed the wordings.

They are based on my teacher’s advice.
And not only that, she talked with me about various topics.

She is a super great teacher!

By the way, here is the document I created.
Slides

スライドが一通り完成したので、先生を相手に、通しで練習してみた。

細かい点をいくつか修正し、文法的には合ってるけど言葉にすると喋りづらかった部分は言い回しを修正。

全てにおいて的確なアドバイスを出してくれるだけでなく、色々な話にも付き合ってくれる先生、マジ神(ゴッド)!

校閲の内容

I almost make a presentation document

→ I almost finished making the presentation document(「完成した」のニュアンスを追加。特定のドキュメントなので the)

practiced through

→ practiced with

And the document has hard to talk, I changed the wording.

→ And, because some sentences were hard to talk, I’ve changed the wordings.(前後半をつなげる because 投入。その他、微修正)

talked with me various conversation.

→ talked with me about various topics.(talk と conversation が重複気味なので、どちらか一方が無難。conversation 使うなら、have を投じるほうが無難)

She is a super greatest teacher!

→ great(最上級の場合は the になるので、ここはひとつ原型どまりで笑)

先生からのコメント

Once you started learning from a new teacher, you will know that I’m not good enough (:P)

LT
kaki en talk ~英語が苦手な日本人エンジニアが書く 英語の日記~ (解説付き)

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