How to get a degree

I tried to search how to get a degree while working.
There are a lot of ways.

There are also ways to get a degree in Japan.
But, If I do it, I’ll try an overseas university.

However, they require a high TOEFUL score to enter, so that’s the first step.

学位の取り方について

社会人をやりながら学位を取る方法について調べてみたけど、結構色々な選択肢があるな。
日本で取る方法もあるけど、せっかくなら海外の大学をやってみるわ。
ただ、入学にTOEFLのスコアがある程度高い事が必要なんで、まずはそこからだな。

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However, they are require a high TOEFUL score to enter, so that’s the first step.
ーー＞However, they require a high TOEFUL score to enter, so that’s the first step.
動詞なのでその前にbe動詞は不要