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Phew! Finally, my headache has cured and fever has gone.
This time, I was the only one who caught a cold in my family, so I could get plenty of rest.
In such cases, isn’t it hard for single mothers?


うぐえええ
ようやく平熱になって頭痛もおさまった。

今回は倒れたのが俺一人だったんで、ゆっくり休めたけど、シングルマザーの人とか、生活ハードモードすぎやせんだろうか。。

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Phew! Finally, my headache has cured and fever has gone.

Finally を使う場合、my headache was cured and the fever went down.

This time, I was the only one who catch a cold in my family, so I could get prenty of rest.

catch → caught
prenty → plenty

In this case, isn’t it hard for single mothers?

In this case(この場合)→ In such cases(こういう場合)

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復活おめでとうございます We’re relieved to hear that!

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