An important item for my son part 6

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The drum sticks my wife bought for my son were dameaged, so her bought new ones.
These are a bit heavier than old ones.

I felt they were a bit heavy for a 3-year-old kid to have.
But, my wife said ’With these sticks, this he will get tired quickly.’

That makes sense.
By the way, The drum sticks in the amusement spot are also heavy.
(Commercially available drum sticks are often much lighter than nstalled ones)


太鼓のバチが痛んできたんで、また新しいものを買った。
前回のより少し重い。

3歳児が持つには少し重い気がしたが、
「その方がすぐに疲れていいじゃない?」
とのこと。

なるほど。
というか、ゲーセンの備え付けのバチもこれぐらいの重量があるな。
(市販のバチは、備え付けよりも相当軽い事が多い。)

校閲の内容

dmaged

→ dameaged

bought a new one

→ bought new ones

heavier old ones.

→ heavier than old ones.

for a 3 year old kid

→ for a 3-year-old kid

With this

→ With these sticks,

The drum stics in the amusement spot are also this heavy.

→ ① sticks
② this は無い方がよさげ もしくは 最後に like these

installed

→ installed ones

先生からのコメント

I can image the sticks even without the photo any more 😀

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