My son was an indoor person until a while ago, but recently he started playing the parks again.
Good!
I made a web site which I uploaded many photos I took at the parks near my house.
I can resume it!
By the way, here it is.
かき ぷれいぐらうんど
【福岡市周辺】公園などの子供が遊ぶ場所の情報をかいてます。
kaki-playground.com
最近、インドア派に傾倒していた息子くんが、また公園で遊んでくれるようになった。
家の近くの公園の写真取っていくサイトを作ってたんで、それが再開できそうで嬉しい。
校閲の内容
My son’s playground
→ うーん、どっちでもいいような気がしますが、サイトを見る限り複数形がベターか？
My son indoor person
→ My son was an indoor person
but recently he start playing in the park again.
→ started / in parks
where I took a photo of a park near my house and uploaded them.
→ which I uploaded many photos I took at the parks near my house. など
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