My son’s playgrounds

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My son was an indoor person until a while ago, but recently he started playing the parks again.
Good!

I made a web site which I uploaded many photos I took at the parks near my house.
I can resume it!


最近、インドア派に傾倒していた息子くんが、また公園で遊んでくれるようになった。
家の近くの公園の写真取っていくサイトを作ってたんで、それが再開できそうで嬉しい。

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My son’s playground

→ うーん、どっちでもいいような気がしますが、サイトを見る限り複数形がベターか?

My son indoor person

→ My son was an indoor person

but recently he start playing in the park again.

→ started / in parks

where I took a photo of a park near my house and uploaded them.

→ which I uploaded many photos I took at the parks near my house. など

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