Me
Thank you as always for checking my diary!
Today’s online lesson, I want to talk about my diary written lately and what you checked.
Katie
That’s fine! I’m glad you could make it.
Please feel free to send over things you want me to have a look at and comment.
Me
Thanks!
It’s a lot of volume, and it’s going to take a long time to explain, so I’ll ask you during lesson time!
Katie
ok sure
次のレッスンの内容
いつも日記の添削をしてくれてありがとう！
今日のオンライン会話レッスンは、最近書いた日記と添削内容について、色々と話したい事があるんだ。
量も多いし、説明が長くなりそうなので、レッスンの時にまとめて聞く事にするよ！
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Thank you as always check my diary!
–> Thank you as always for checking my diary!
thank you for 〜ingで〜してくれてありがとうになる
Today’s online lesson, I want to talk about my lately written my diary and what you checked.
–>Today’s online lesson, I want to talk about my diary written lately and what you checked.
lately writtenでも伝わりますがwritten latelyで後ろにつけた方が読みやすいです
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