Phew! Finally, my headache has cured and fever has gone.
This time, I was the only one who caught a cold in my family, so I could get plenty of rest.
In such cases, isn’t it hard for single mothers?
うぐえええ
ようやく平熱になって頭痛もおさまった。
今回は倒れたのが俺一人だったんで、ゆっくり休めたけど、シングルマザーの人とか、生活ハードモードすぎやせんだろうか。。
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Phew! Finally, my headache has cured and fever has gone.
Finally を使う場合、my headache was cured and the fever went down.
This time, I was the only one who catch a cold in my family, so I could get prenty of rest.
catch → caught
prenty → plenty
In this case, isn’t it hard for single mothers?
In this case(この場合)→ In such cases(こういう場合)
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復活おめでとうございます We’re relieved to hear that!
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