World wide famous song

Recently, My 4yo son has been into the song Coffin Dance by Ghanaian artist “Dancing Pallbearers”.
When I told Ghanaian tutor about it, he looked happy.

I felt that music has the power to transcend nationality, race, age, gender, and everything else.

世界的に有名な曲

最近、４歳の息子が、ガーナのアーティスト「ダンシング・ポールベアラーズ」の「Coffin Dance」という曲に夢中です。
音楽には、国籍・人種・年齢・性別といった、あらゆるものを越える力があることを実感します。

英会話レッスンにて、ガーナ人の講師に、この話をしたら、彼は嬉しそうな反応をしていました。

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World famous song
→world wide famous song

1 Recently, my 4-year-old son is really into the song “Coffin Dance” by Ghanaian artist “Dancing Pallbearers”.
→My 4yo son has been into the song Coffin Dance by 〜

2 I fill that music has the power to transcend nationality, race, age, gender, and everything else.
→I felt that 〜

3 When I told this episode to a Ghanaian tutor at an English lesson, he responded happily.
→when I told Ghanaian tutor about it , he looked(became) happy.